The Price of Happiness

 

What's one question that has sparked lots of debates and controversies? I believe there are quite a lot, but perhaps we can all agree that the question “can money buy happiness?” is among the top on the list. The idealistic answer has always been in the negative, as a great number of people would argue that money can buy you materialistic things, but it can never guarantee your happiness. Allow me to disagree with this common perception, because I believe that money is such an important tool that could grant you the cause for your happiness. 


In today's world, being financially secure can open the doors to comfort, freedom, and luxury. Many may argue that materialistic items do not equate to true happiness, but to me, being able to purchase whatever makes you happy, such as luxury bags and designer clothes, will always put a smile on your face. Money can buy you a house, a car, and other essentials that provide stability and comfort. I would much rather be sad in a mansion than be sad without a roof over my head or reliable transportation. Being able to own a house and a vehicle without having to worry about paying rent or missing the bus gives me a sense of ease and relief. Additionally, money allows people to travel the world–a privilege that is known to get rid of stress and improve your mental health. Travel opens doors for you to experience broader perspectives and new cultures, meet new people, and learn new settings and languages all while also healing your soul from any stressors or burdens. 


Another reason why money can lead to happiness is the fact that it is maintains a connection to health, the most important aspect of life. While people may argue that health is the most important thing and has priority over money, let’s not forget how much harder it is to afford the hefty cost of healthcare these days. Regular checkups, emergency surgeries, dental care, birth, and many other forms of medical aid are definitely not free of charge. People who do not have the financial resources to access healthcare will most likely ignore their physical and mental health. On the other hand, those with money can afford access to good healthcare services and are likely to lead a happier and healthier lifestyle. Indeed, we cannot deny that money can buy you health, which is arguably more important than money itself. What better way to enjoy life than to be healthy and wealthy! 


Beyond personal comfort, having money can inspire others to make a meaningful impact on other people's lives, which is another factor that can lead to happiness. Those who are already financially stable and do not need to worry about the comfort of their own lives will go out of their way to make sure that others are living a comfortable life as well. They are more capable of giving, whether that's through charity, small acts of kindness, creating organizations to help out, etc. Helping those in need brings you a strong sense of satisfaction or accomplishment; this is a feeling you will not be able to realize unless you have the financial means to assist others and lessen their burden. Because of this, money not only improves your life, but also allows acts of generosity that contribute to helping others who are in need.  


There have always been two schools of thought divided around the question whether money buys happiness or not. Regardless of where you stand with regard to this debate, there is no denying that money has become a significant tool in our present day–a tool that paves the way for a comfortable, healthy, and satisfactory lifestyle. I agree that there are those that money will never be sufficient to secure their happiness, such as individuals afflicted with specific ailments, such incurable diseases, substance addicts, and mental health patients. That said, I believe that financial stability is key to putting you on the road to a stable and happy life.


Comments

  1. I really like the content of this essay. You are able to break down lots of different examples/reasoning very effectively, while keeping a pace that doesn't feel overly rushed or crowded. I really like the analysis, and my only advice would be to dive deeper into the personal side. It can be tricky to balance the personal and argumentative/persuasive style, but I think you could add a lot of weight to your argument by getting more specific. Maybe an instance that proves one of your points? Or when you really had a breakthrough in your stance that made or solidified it? Or your observations growing up of people who were or were not wealthy and how they support your argument. A concrete instance and maybe a reflection/breakdown on that could be really valuable and persuasive. Overall, this paper is well formatted and flows very nicely!

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  2. Hello, this is such an interesting essay that gives you prospective on a common and popular question. I do think the essay could use a short personal antidote of some time that you wanted to have money, and became sad because you didn't. I think also taking down some common points directly would create more discussion within the essay. Of of google, some are, money doesn't help with; Personal growth, meaningful relationships, and states of our physical and mental being. I hope this helps you and great essay!!!

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  3. Hi Salma, I enjoyed reading your blog post. You do a great job illustrating the different aspects of a complex topic, while establishing your personal stance on the topic. Your essay does a great job exploring the different ways money can open roads to happiness as well. I would curious to hear more about your own personal perspective on money, and how you would approach money in your life. I feel like the essay is insightful but could be even more insightful if you further illustrated how these ideas might apply to your own life. For example, how much does money matter to you in the future? Does money influence your potential career choice? These answers could make the essay feel a bit more personal and incorporate more reflection. Overall, great post!

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